Excerpts from previous website reviews
To illustrate the wide scope of
our website reviews and give you some idea of
what to expect, here are some excerpts from reviews
that we have written for real clients. All names
and URLs have been removed to protect their identities.
Initial impressions
"the main problem with the site is not
the way it looks – it is the message it
is trying to deliver."
"There’s no need to squeeze so
much content into one single page, as it ends
up looking quite spammy and is unlikely to hold
a visitor’s attention for very long. The
signature at the end of the page also seems superfluous,
and gives the site a dated "welcome to
my homepage" feel."
"The only problem
I found was the fact that the Index page is
so text-heavy, yet fails to make some very
important things sufficiently clear. I feel
that the space where the current initial paragraph
is located could be put to better use. Within
seconds of landing on your site, I would like
to understand what the product is, and who
it is aimed at."
Navigation and ease
of use
"It is a fascinating
source of information, but it could prove to
be quite problematic for someone who is mainly
interested in buying the software. There is
simply too much, and there isn't a clearly
marked path for somebody who wants to a) find
out more about the software or b) download
or buy it."
"Some of the
information that could be interesting to a
potential client is hidden away behind links
that sound as if they don't offer anything
of value."
"The simple
fact that there are three tabbed side menus,
with a total of 48 main links, clearly shows
that something needs to be done. There are
too many options, and not anywhere near enough
information for potential buyers. On this site,
the sales process clearly does not come first
- it is only in third or fourth place."
Usability
"The only thing
that I would change is the screenshots - they
are nice and clear, but there is no explanation
at all as to what they show. I think you need
to assume that your visitors know nothing at
all about your product, and provide a lot more
hand-holding that you currently do."
"A small point
about the tour: as you view the slides, the
Next and Previous buttons are not in the order
that most sites use. I found myself accidentally
clicking Previous several times, and going
back rather than forward."
Message conveyed
"The first line
on the first page is the most important spot
of your whole website - yet you have chosen
to devote it to general history rather than
your own product. The second sentence introduces
your product, but it is very dry and focuses
purely on functions and history. This is not
a good way to attract attention."
"The interesting thing
about this site was that when I first saw it,
I immediately felt as though I did not know enough
to understand the product. The impression I got
was that this software was intended for a relatively
small group of professionals who would understand
what "XXXX" and "YYYY" might
be. Later, I realised that this was not the case. "
Pushing the sale
"the differences
between the various options are not made clear
enough. I think you need a page that briefly
describes all the available options, the costs,
and what is included. Currently it is spread
out over the entire site, making it more difficult
for a potential client to make an informed
choice."
"I have never seen a software site that
pushes the sale less than this one. Selling the
product is almost an afterthought - in fact,
the word "buy" doesn't even appear
once on your Index page. There are no "Buy
Now" buttons, no incitement to download,
and no reasons why anyone might want to consider
doing so."
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